01-17-2016, 07:16 AM
I really like the imagery; the almost frankness of the subject in it means it could be interpreted in many different ways, I love the ambiguity of it.
Also the way the sentences arent always technically full sentences is really good too - 8/10, good poem, dude
Also the way the sentences arent always technically full sentences is really good too - 8/10, good poem, dude