01-17-2016, 03:10 AM
(01-17-2016, 02:24 AM)Jeremiahcp Wrote: Thanks for the input guys/gals. Yes, this was inspired by the seven league boots. I feel the meaning of the poem is not very direct, but it is also suppose to be sort of a riddle. So I am having a hard time judging the clarity of the poem. If I take 3 steps and travel 21 steps, then I only got to enjoy 3 of the total steps traveled and I missed out on 18 steps that, while traveled, I did not take myself. The poem is about taking shortcuts through life, and what we lose when we do.If that was your aim, I think you can add to it to somehow let me know what is missed.
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