01-16-2016, 01:53 PM
^ Which is part of why I didn't actually say to just cut out the second stanza. Nonetheless, the two stanzas together, in my opinion/perspective, could easily still be said in a more concise, more compact, and more impacting form than the two original stanzas.
If you're the smartest person in the room, you're in the wrong room.
"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona
"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona