01-16-2016, 01:32 AM
Oh yeah, I don't know how I missed that. If you're going to use "and" there, there is really no need for a coma is there, but I do like ella's idea of an am dash.
Just to see how that looks.
The back sweat on my sheets
is cold—I wake up tired
of old dreams.
Yeah, I like that, very clean.
dale
Just to see how that looks.
The back sweat on my sheets
is cold—I wake up tired
of old dreams.
Yeah, I like that, very clean.
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.