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Morning Has Broken
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01-15-2016, 06:58 PM
I love the L2 break, you might try an em dash in place of the ", and". Effective piece.
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Morning Has Broken - by Wjames - 01-15-2016, 07:44 AM
RE: Morning Has Broken - by Erthona - 01-15-2016, 07:59 AM
RE: Morning Has Broken - by ellajam - 01-15-2016, 06:58 PM
RE: Morning Has Broken - by Erthona - 01-16-2016, 01:32 AM
RE: Morning Has Broken - by Wjames - 01-22-2016, 07:28 AM
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