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[rayheinrich]

Well crafted Ray. The only troublesome line for me is "same here". I realize this line serves a specific function, but I think you could find another way. I wonder if you could give the reader more credit and cut the line completely? 
Thanks for the cheap booty beauty,
Paul

Yeah, you're right. I was a bit tired when I wrote it, I think it was me who needed the explanation.
I took it out... it improves the symmetry as well.
"Booty and the Breast"
Ray