01-12-2016, 11:55 PM
(01-12-2016, 11:00 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:Well crafted Ray. The only troublesome line for me is "same here". I realize this line serves a specific function, but I think you could find another way. I wonder if you could give the reader more credit and cut the line completely?
"La belle et la bête" - Bioy Grillet
< poetry and masturbation >
poetry is cheap beauty
most people need cheap
everybody needs beauty
masturbation is cheap pleasure
same here
beauty?
pleasure?
the confusion is inevitable
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Thanks for the cheap booty beauty,
Paul


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