Another New Year’s
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I find the first stanza has a contradiction. Surely footsteps imply noise, but tiptoe implies silence?
Teardrops brimming with kisses also, at least for me, seems strange unless the love implied is unrequited?
Finally, can a beginning be never ending?
Your poem reads nicely and has passion within it so even with my comments it is a pleasure to read.
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Another New Year’s - by browtm7 - 01-06-2016, 11:13 AM
RE: Another New Year’s - by emyleerose - 01-06-2016, 12:40 PM
RE: Another New Year’s - by browtm7 - 01-07-2016, 07:46 AM
RE: Another New Year’s - by UselessBlueprint - 01-07-2016, 02:14 PM
RE: Another New Year’s - by browtm7 - 01-09-2016, 12:45 AM
RE: Another New Year’s - by roggi - 01-08-2016, 07:39 PM
RE: Another New Year’s - by Julius - 01-12-2016, 04:55 AM



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