01-10-2016, 07:25 AM
i'll get but-fucked for this but i think it's more senryu. haiku tend not to be liberally flowered with poetic device. i think it could do with a better cut. you could achieve this by removing the to.
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RE: January (Haiku) - by just mercedes - 01-10-2016, 07:39 AM
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