Snowmelt
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(01-09-2016, 12:01 PM)Emz Wrote:  I like this.

I think it would be better if the words were outside of the actual picture. Either that, or maybe change the font colour to white. The deep red on the green/black is difficult on the eyes (at least for me).

Other than that, it's an interesting picture with a good combination of wordsSmile
Thanks for stopping by, emz. I was aiming for the text to be barely visible but I may have taken it a bit too far. I like the red on green because that's the way it grows, with the red threading its way through the green, but I'll see if I can tweak it, the app must be around here somewhere. Smile

(01-09-2016, 12:28 PM)just mercedes Wrote:  I love the way the image IS the poem. But I shy from 'bleeding heart' as a cliche.
Does it grow where you are? Lamprocapnos spectabilis, bleeding heart is what it's called here. It erupts from bare ground first thing in spring with the bulbs, forms a nice sized bush then disappears by mid-summer. I'll think about whether a word other than bleeding would work, but I love the common names of flowers, Nigella's love-in-a-mist is my favorite. Smile
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Messages In This Thread
Snowmelt - by ellajam - 11-27-2015, 10:32 PM
RE: Snowmelt - by Emz - 01-09-2016, 12:01 PM
RE: Snowmelt - by just mercedes - 01-09-2016, 12:28 PM
RE: Snowmelt - by ellajam - 01-09-2016, 08:07 PM
RE: Snowmelt - by Jeremiahcp - 01-18-2016, 02:34 AM
RE: Snowmelt - by ellajam - 01-18-2016, 02:41 AM
RE: Snowmelt - by Jeremiahcp - 01-18-2016, 02:44 AM
RE: Snowmelt - by ellajam - 01-18-2016, 03:09 AM
RE: Snowmelt - by sharon rhutasel - 01-19-2016, 05:00 AM
RE: Snowmelt - by ellajam - 01-19-2016, 06:02 AM



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