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01-09-2016, 05:05 PM
Thanks for all the feedback guys/gals, I appreciate it. I edited the OP, for the rewrite, as I think UselessBlueprint is right. There is no need for the 2nd stanza, as it does not bring anything else to the poem that is not already said in the first stanza. After considering all the input, at this time, I consider that revision the final version.
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Untitled - by Jeremiahcp - 01-09-2016, 04:22 AM
RE: Untitled - by UselessBlueprint - 01-09-2016, 06:53 AM
RE: Untitled - by Jeremiahcp - 01-09-2016, 07:35 AM
RE: Untitled - by NickyDubs - 01-09-2016, 07:11 AM
RE: Untitled - by Beat Eater - 01-09-2016, 07:41 AM
RE: Untitled - by Jeremiahcp - 01-09-2016, 08:03 AM
RE: Untitled - by Achebe - 01-09-2016, 08:27 AM
RE: Untitled - by Magpie - 01-09-2016, 12:07 PM
RE: Untitled - by Jeremiahcp - 01-09-2016, 05:05 PM
RE: Untitled - by abbigailpaige - 01-16-2016, 04:51 AM
RE: Untitled - by QDeathstar - 01-16-2016, 08:49 AM
RE: Untitled - by UselessBlueprint - 01-16-2016, 01:53 PM
RE: Untitled - by rhoiyt - 01-16-2016, 09:51 PM
RE: Untitled - by Jeremiahcp - 01-17-2016, 02:48 AM
RE: Untitled - by ellajam - 01-17-2016, 02:55 AM
RE: Untitled - by Erthona - 01-21-2016, 01:49 AM
RE: Untitled - by Jeremiahcp - 01-24-2016, 02:09 AM
RE: Untitled - by mcauburn - 01-21-2016, 02:54 AM
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