Another New Year’s
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It reminds me of Freezetag an old song from lifetimes ago. There's a lot unsaid, which for me is the fun of a good poem, it leaves room for the reader to imagine a scene. I could envisage both happy and unhappy conclusions. 
Well done, exiting,dance like beginning drew me in.
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Another New Year’s - by browtm7 - 01-06-2016, 11:13 AM
RE: Another New Year’s - by emyleerose - 01-06-2016, 12:40 PM
RE: Another New Year’s - by browtm7 - 01-07-2016, 07:46 AM
RE: Another New Year’s - by UselessBlueprint - 01-07-2016, 02:14 PM
RE: Another New Year’s - by browtm7 - 01-09-2016, 12:45 AM
RE: Another New Year’s - by roggi - 01-08-2016, 07:39 PM
RE: Another New Year’s - by Julius - 01-12-2016, 04:55 AM



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