Beat (rev 1 Apache, header change , added Austin Texas)
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Beat (rev 1 Apache, header change , added Austin Texas)
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01-07-2016, 08:44 PM
I've been over this at least ten times now,and barely scratching the surface. Enthralling stuff! I'll try a proper crit when I've further digested.
In the meantime, could please you reconsider your "phallic symbol"... It feels lazy and sticks out like a ...  To be continued. Thanks, t |
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Beat (rev 1 Apache, header change , added Austin Texas) - by Erthona - 01-07-2016, 12:09 AM
RE: Beat - by tomoffing - 01-07-2016, 08:44 PM
RE: Beat (rev 1 Apache, header change , added Austin Texas) - by Apache - 01-09-2016, 05:06 AM
RE: Beat (rev 1 Apache, header change , added Austin Texas) - by just mercedes - 01-09-2016, 05:35 AM
RE: Beat (rev 1 Apache, header change , added Austin Texas) - by Erthona - 01-09-2016, 08:18 AM
RE: Beat (rev 1 Apache, header change , added Austin Texas) - by Magpie - 01-09-2016, 11:45 AM
RE: Beat (rev 1 Apache, header change , added Austin Texas) - by Erthona - 01-11-2016, 12:03 AM
RE: Beat (rev 1 Apache, header change , added Austin Texas) - by Magpie - 01-13-2016, 04:18 AM
RE: Beat (rev 1 Apache, header change , added Austin Texas) - by Erthona - 01-14-2016, 01:29 AM
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