Taking Flight [Major Revision-New Title]

Taking Flight [Major Revision-New Title]

Emz

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01-06-2016, 10:50 PM

Thank you all for your comments! I hope this revision is a step-up.

It probably could use another good ripping into. I played around with some punctuation and tried to add more creative ideas and express my initial thoughts.

Emma

These fragments I have shored against my ruins
Why then Ile fit you
-T.S. Eliot (The Wasteland)

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Taking Flight [Major Revision-New Title] - by Emz - 01-02-2016, 03:48 PM

RE: Phases - by Achebe - 01-02-2016, 07:45 PM

RE: Phases - by Emz - 01-03-2016, 11:29 AM

RE: Phases - by rayheinrich - 01-02-2016, 08:33 PM

RE: Phases - by Emz - 01-02-2016, 11:41 PM

RE: Phases - by rayheinrich - 01-03-2016, 12:26 AM

RE: Phases - by billy - 01-03-2016, 06:12 PM

RE: Phases - by ellajam - 01-03-2016, 08:16 PM

RE: Taking Flight [Major Revision-New Title] - by Emz - 01-06-2016, 10:50 PM

RE: Taking Flight [Major Revision-New Title] - by rayheinrich - 01-08-2016, 04:37 PM

RE: Taking Flight [Major Revision-New Title] - by billy - 01-08-2016, 05:34 PM

RE: Taking Flight [Major Revision-New Title] - by Achebe - 01-09-2016, 08:40 AM

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