01-06-2016, 03:36 AM
(01-05-2016, 04:51 PM)PoetCraft Wrote: But the poem ends too abruptly. Something is missing and you didn't bring it out. I feel difficult to echo with your ending question "Where are you from?".A few people have said that. My poem is a long reply to the question "where are you from?", because geographically I've moved around a lot and thus am from many places, but my mind is from many places too. The question is often used in small talk and this is my overly deep reply, though it truly is "where I'm from." The final line is a "oh.. and where are you from?" Not saying it fits in, just my reason for putting it there

