01-03-2016, 08:23 AM
I wonder if you could weave personification into this poem. Perhaps the perspective of the windscreen wipers could be explored, as well as tweaking the rhythm to match the sound of a rain and the relentless wipers.
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Futility edit 1 - by QDeathstar - 01-01-2016, 02:20 PM
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RE: Futility - by MAE27 - 01-03-2016, 08:23 AM
RE: Futility - by QDeathstar - 01-25-2016, 11:05 AM
RE: Futility edit 1 - by milo - 01-25-2016, 11:41 AM
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