The Destination

The Destination

Achebe Offline

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01-02-2016, 07:17 AM

The only geometry I could discern were "centre" and "focus".
For the second line to ring true, you might want to add a few more geometrical allusions in the body of the poem.

~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

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The Destination - by REW - 12-31-2015, 09:56 AM

RE: A Journey - by dukealien - 01-01-2016, 08:05 AM

RE: A Journey - by REW - 01-01-2016, 09:17 AM

RE: The Destination - by Apache - 01-02-2016, 05:03 AM

RE: The Destination - by REW - 01-02-2016, 09:07 AM

RE: The Destination - by Achebe - 01-02-2016, 07:17 AM

RE: The Destination - by mlund - 01-03-2016, 04:28 AM

RE: The Destination - by REW - 01-03-2016, 11:50 AM

RE: The Destination - by milo - 01-03-2016, 12:24 PM

RE: The Destination - by REW - 01-03-2016, 12:55 PM

RE: The Destination - by Achebe - 02-27-2016, 09:09 PM

RE: The Destination - by REW - 03-03-2016, 04:06 AM

RE: The Destination - by Reluctant Poet - 02-28-2016, 07:32 AM

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