01-02-2016, 04:43 AM
One of my first poems. Feedback is appreciated.
The irresistible incentive to love another
Is one Truly unmatched
The True bliss of her soft lips
Is a True, divine gift
Her zephyr-like gaze, entrenched with the deepest sapphire
Has pierced the depths of my unreachable soul
A stroke undisputedly delighting caresses my skin
She must be an angel, undoubtedly akin
The tranquil air melts, the hourglass drips
I tell myself "Loves not Times fool"
Her lips become vapid and wearisome
The sapphire shade fades into apparition
His bending sickle's compass came
Only to reveal the nightmare Life-in-Death
The irresistible incentive to love another
Is one without True Intentions
The irresistible incentive to love another
Is one Truly unmatched
The True bliss of her soft lips
Is a True, divine gift
Her zephyr-like gaze, entrenched with the deepest sapphire
Has pierced the depths of my unreachable soul
A stroke undisputedly delighting caresses my skin
She must be an angel, undoubtedly akin
The tranquil air melts, the hourglass drips
I tell myself "Loves not Times fool"
Her lips become vapid and wearisome
The sapphire shade fades into apparition
His bending sickle's compass came
Only to reveal the nightmare Life-in-Death
The irresistible incentive to love another
Is one without True Intentions