Snow where else to be (in February)

[Magpie]

Hi Emz,

Your edited version is much clearer than the original. I agree with Dale that 'on' works better than 'upon'.
With short poetry I always try and trim as much as possible, with this in mind I think your last line could lose the 'the' and still read the same, I even think the last line could simply be 'snowfall' and the meaning is still conveyed.

Thanks for the read,

Mark