Spinning Tires (edit #2)

[ellajam]

Dear Ellajam,

this poem I liked very much, as for the first time (I am such a newbie to poetry!) I understood, how it is powerful NOT to rhyme.
I like the way this plays with anticipation.

Maybe I will try this next time I have to write a poem.
Thank you. :-)

Thanks, Pyrra. Take a look at the Poetry Practice forum, it is full of forms with various rhyme schemes and refrains to try out. This is a Rondeau, practice thread here:
http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-3552.html