12-31-2015, 11:49 PM
Welcome Pyrra!
Close! This is a senryu. It follows the same format as a haiku, but a senryu deals with human nature rather than season nature. However, modern haiku poems don't abide by the content rule, so I suppose you could call it a modern haiku as well
Either way I like this, especially the last line!
Emma
Close! This is a senryu. It follows the same format as a haiku, but a senryu deals with human nature rather than season nature. However, modern haiku poems don't abide by the content rule, so I suppose you could call it a modern haiku as well
Either way I like this, especially the last line!
Emma
These fragments I have shored against my ruins
Why then Ile fit you
-T.S. Eliot (The Wasteland)
Why then Ile fit you
-T.S. Eliot (The Wasteland)