12-31-2015, 02:23 AM
Emz,
I'm not sure "upon" is the best word usage here. I went and looked through the dictionary and there are many definitions of "upon" and none really seem to fit well. I had thought maybe an idiom, but no. Maybe just "on". As "Weather is lost on New York (this time of year. I am assuming you are implying Christmas/New years?).
I do like the idea, but the arrangement of the lines makes for some difficult reading. One might edit for better clarity, such as:
"weather lost on New York
come a month
the snow shall fall"
Best,
Dale
I'm not sure "upon" is the best word usage here. I went and looked through the dictionary and there are many definitions of "upon" and none really seem to fit well. I had thought maybe an idiom, but no. Maybe just "on". As "Weather is lost on New York (this time of year. I am assuming you are implying Christmas/New years?).
I do like the idea, but the arrangement of the lines makes for some difficult reading. One might edit for better clarity, such as:
"weather lost on New York
come a month
the snow shall fall"
Best,
Dale
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The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.