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[Emz]

Above the noise of the street,
three birds find
harmony.

Hi WJames,

I like this. I have made a couple of adjustments below:

Above noise 
of the street, three birds 
find harmony.

I believe this balances the shape of the haiku, while also providing the contrast of the two images which meet in the middle line.

I think it does work better with the "find", but I'd remove the "the" from "Above the noise".

I enjoyed this haiku

Emma