12-29-2015, 03:16 AM
While my intentions to come back and offer a decent critique will probably pave
a bit more of my road to hell; I just had to note that I (as well) found the 6th stanza
interesting. It also provides a needed pause -- punctuation, if you will -- that compliments
the pacing of the rest of the poem.
Especially loved these lines:
"shall I watch a little Netflix
- or is a joint enough?"
a bit more of my road to hell; I just had to note that I (as well) found the 6th stanza
interesting. It also provides a needed pause -- punctuation, if you will -- that compliments
the pacing of the rest of the poem.
Especially loved these lines:
"shall I watch a little Netflix
- or is a joint enough?"
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions