12-28-2015, 06:28 AM
Thanks, Q.
I need to change that misplaced modifier there. And will also do SOMETHING with still air that moves.
The parking lot was a typo, added a "the"
No one seems to like impotent sweat, although it ties that it's so hot and humid sweating is worthless, please how helpless the boy feels. Will alter it.
Writing was easier when I was younger. I feel like I am trying to use an atrophied limb that refuses to be still.
I need to change that misplaced modifier there. And will also do SOMETHING with still air that moves.
The parking lot was a typo, added a "the"
No one seems to like impotent sweat, although it ties that it's so hot and humid sweating is worthless, please how helpless the boy feels. Will alter it.
Writing was easier when I was younger. I feel like I am trying to use an atrophied limb that refuses to be still.