12-27-2015, 02:53 AM
(12-26-2015, 11:18 PM)shurgaree Wrote: Thank you for your suggestions, I'll certainly work them into my poem. off to Colorado for a little road trip & some fun (I'm not from Liverpool), Made a couple quick edits, will look at it more thoroughly when I've got time
Looks good. Have fun in Colorado. Don't spend too much on retro-counter-culture artifacts or,
for that matter, weed. See you when you get back.
all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?