12-24-2015, 11:44 PM
Yeah, I was going for schlocky. Which raises the question, why am I looking for feedback . . .
I guess, I'm in a weird place regarding lyrics just now, because there seems to be an appetite for iterative lines, twists that make an old thing seem new, like a Dillard's catalogue.
Your reference to Adele is fitting, as her most recent work is her most facile, and I was trying to write something like it.
Be careful what you wish for, maybe. I'm pretty turned around, honestly.
I guess, I'm in a weird place regarding lyrics just now, because there seems to be an appetite for iterative lines, twists that make an old thing seem new, like a Dillard's catalogue.
Your reference to Adele is fitting, as her most recent work is her most facile, and I was trying to write something like it.
Be careful what you wish for, maybe. I'm pretty turned around, honestly.
A yak is normal.