12-23-2015, 01:34 AM
Well done on the bitter, the sharp lashing out.
Love this as it hints at life still left and would still be at home in a less grumpy experience as well as here:
Gabrielle’s Horn.
Gabrielle’s Fog Horn.
Gabrielle’s Fog creeps in on
little cat’s feet,
on little death’s feet.
You might lose the comma L2.
Love this as it hints at life still left and would still be at home in a less grumpy experience as well as here:
Gabrielle’s Horn.
Gabrielle’s Fog Horn.
Gabrielle’s Fog creeps in on
little cat’s feet,
on little death’s feet.
You might lose the comma L2.
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