Our Lady The Opaque
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Our Lady The Opaque

I will not look at you
your eyes and your face and your hands
I hold them in the blurred periphery 
like the sun and the stars
you glow brighter when I look away

I will not see through you
your face and the mind beyond it
I halt my guessing at your feet
whatever fears or desires pulse therein
you do not need me to draw them from you

I will not touch you
your mind opaque and voice a mist
I know the venom in my hands
and the spines on my tongue
you are fading quick enough without my help

[This is a piece I've been working on for awhile, some lines have resisted all efforts, any input will be appreciated.]
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Our Lady The Opaque - by Jacob - 12-20-2015, 12:19 PM
RE: Our Lady The Opaque - by ellajam - 12-20-2015, 04:50 PM
RE: Our Lady The Opaque - by Jacob - 12-22-2015, 01:05 PM
RE: Our Lady The Opaque - by billy - 12-22-2015, 05:06 PM
RE: Our Lady The Opaque - by Erthona - 12-22-2015, 08:07 PM
RE: Our Lady The Opaque - by Jacob - 12-23-2015, 02:53 PM
RE: Our Lady The Opaque - by billy - 12-24-2015, 09:48 AM
RE: Our Lady The Opaque - by Achebe - 12-23-2015, 03:38 PM
RE: Our Lady The Opaque - by Jacob - 12-25-2015, 10:04 AM
RE: Our Lady The Opaque - by billy - 12-26-2015, 05:53 PM
RE: Our Lady The Opaque - by ellajam - 12-25-2015, 10:33 AM
RE: Our Lady The Opaque - by rayheinrich - 12-26-2015, 02:16 AM
RE: Our Lady The Opaque - by Erthona - 12-26-2015, 08:03 PM
RE: Our Lady The Opaque - by Jacob - 12-27-2015, 03:29 PM
RE: Our Lady The Opaque - by ellajam - 12-27-2015, 08:51 PM
RE: Our Lady The Opaque - by Erthona - 12-28-2015, 09:14 AM
RE: Our Lady the Abstruse - by rayheinrich - 12-28-2015, 01:03 PM
RE: Our Lady The Opaque - by REW - 12-30-2015, 02:05 PM
RE: Our Lady The Opaque - by Magpie - 12-30-2015, 03:57 PM



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