The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #3)

The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #3)

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12-20-2015, 11:34 AM

even though flawed, the original was .... original, beautiful too.
the last stanza (strophe? i read your Colin Ward's tips) in particular.

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The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #3) - by ellajam - 11-28-2015, 01:04 AM

RE: The Gift of Loss - by Tiger the Lion - 11-28-2015, 03:34 AM

RE: The Gift of Loss - by ellajam - 11-28-2015, 04:00 AM

RE: The Gift of Loss - by ThatsNotFennel - 11-28-2015, 07:39 AM

RE: The Gift of Loss - by just mercedes - 11-28-2015, 11:50 AM

RE: The Gift of Loss - by Achebe - 11-28-2015, 12:02 PM

RE: The Gift of Loss - by QDeathstar - 11-28-2015, 12:11 PM

RE: The Gift of Loss - by ellajam - 11-28-2015, 02:26 PM

RE: The Gift of Loss - by rayheinrich - 11-28-2015, 02:48 PM

RE: The Gift of Loss - by ellajam - 11-28-2015, 03:15 PM

RE: The Gift of Loss - by aschueler - 11-29-2015, 12:35 AM

RE: The Gift of Loss - by ellajam - 11-29-2015, 01:59 AM

RE: The Gift of Loss - by aschueler - 11-29-2015, 05:59 AM

RE: The Gift of Loss - by ellajam - 12-17-2015, 10:48 PM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by Tiger the Lion - 11-29-2015, 02:35 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by ellajam - 11-29-2015, 04:27 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by QDeathstar - 11-29-2015, 04:46 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by ellajam - 11-29-2015, 05:03 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by Jacob - 12-20-2015, 08:51 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by ellajam - 12-20-2015, 09:09 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by Jacob - 12-20-2015, 09:30 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by ellajam - 12-20-2015, 10:57 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by Achebe - 12-20-2015, 11:34 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by ellajam - 12-20-2015, 03:51 PM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by Achebe - 12-20-2015, 06:08 PM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by Achebe - 12-20-2015, 08:31 PM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by ellajam - 12-20-2015, 09:49 PM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by Leanne - 12-21-2015, 05:12 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by milo - 12-21-2015, 06:49 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by ellajam - 12-21-2015, 09:58 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by milo - 12-22-2015, 07:24 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by ellajam - 12-22-2015, 08:19 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by billy - 12-22-2015, 05:40 PM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by ellajam - 12-31-2015, 12:50 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by Emz - 12-28-2015, 08:51 PM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #1) - by ellajam - 12-29-2015, 01:57 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by Pyrra - 12-31-2015, 01:45 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by ellajam - 01-02-2016, 07:52 PM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by Tiger the Lion - 12-31-2015, 02:06 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by ellajam - 12-31-2015, 02:34 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by REW - 12-31-2015, 10:11 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by ellajam - 12-31-2015, 10:30 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by rayheinrich - 12-31-2015, 12:34 PM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by ellajam - 12-31-2015, 02:13 PM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by rayheinrich - 12-31-2015, 05:14 PM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by Xctv - 01-02-2016, 02:34 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by ellajam - 01-02-2016, 03:40 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by rayheinrich - 01-02-2016, 11:01 PM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by Pyrra - 01-04-2016, 05:34 PM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by Akira - 01-06-2016, 11:21 PM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by ellajam - 01-07-2016, 12:21 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by Akira - 01-07-2016, 06:07 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by ellajam - 01-07-2016, 07:36 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by ellajam - 03-11-2016, 11:46 AM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by Tiger the Lion - 03-11-2016, 12:17 PM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by ellajam - 03-11-2016, 12:27 PM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by jameso - 03-11-2016, 12:45 PM

RE: The Gift Of The Empty Hand (edit #2) - by ellajam - 03-11-2016, 12:50 PM

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