12-20-2015, 10:32 AM
1) "a Firebird burns behind my eyes,
grasping feathers, hands in flames
through these woods
I rise again."
beautiful.
2) i googled 'russian willow' to see if it was found in that part of the world (hoping to correct you)...and wow: The Russian Federation has the world's largest area of natural willow stands http://www.fao.org/docrep/008/a0026e/a0026e03.htm
so i learnt something new.
3) breathe your Russian smell.....sounds better in my head with 'breathe your boyar smell'. Both for the alliteration and the greater political correctness...
grasping feathers, hands in flames
through these woods
I rise again."
beautiful.
2) i googled 'russian willow' to see if it was found in that part of the world (hoping to correct you)...and wow: The Russian Federation has the world's largest area of natural willow stands http://www.fao.org/docrep/008/a0026e/a0026e03.htm
so i learnt something new.
3) breathe your Russian smell.....sounds better in my head with 'breathe your boyar smell'. Both for the alliteration and the greater political correctness...