12-20-2015, 09:24 AM
(12-13-2015, 05:14 AM)Larry B. Wrote: In a Fall
As leaves flutter to the ground,
Some might wonder what they've found
In a life filled with wonder,
Sunshine, rain, wind, and thunder.
Change does arrive in the fall,
May also in falls from grace I don't understand this line, mostly because of the 'in' before 'falls.'
That take one to a new place,
Some of life's issues to face. This stanza is awkward to me because I expect a complete sentence.
There, nervously awaiting, 'Awaiting' makes me think, 'awaiting what?' Perhaps 'waiting' would be better.
Even anticipating
Interpretations anew,
Displaying another view.
With time, insights come and go,
Leading one again to know
That process is nature's way,
Evolving each day by day.
Larry B. ......
... thanks, all !!!