I like that it's organized. Fear and comfort, to pain, to love, and then a conclusion. I also like your word choice, especially 'luxury' and 'companionship'. 'Bare' I feel is unnecessary while you have 'naked.'
The line "yet i feel a solace i haven't found in years." sounds a little strange because first you say you have the solace and immediately afterward you say you don't have it. Maybe 'hadn't' would be a better word choice. Then again, I'm partial to past tense.
The line "yet i feel a solace i haven't found in years." sounds a little strange because first you say you have the solace and immediately afterward you say you don't have it. Maybe 'hadn't' would be a better word choice. Then again, I'm partial to past tense.