Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah!

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Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah!

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12-19-2015, 08:23 AM

I think light verse sounds better when it rhymes as well.

All other conclusions draw naturally from that one.

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Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by Leanne - 12-19-2015, 08:09 AM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by milo - 12-19-2015, 08:23 AM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by Achebe - 12-19-2015, 08:25 AM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by Leanne - 12-19-2015, 08:33 AM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by Leanne - 12-19-2015, 08:36 AM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by billy - 12-19-2015, 08:42 AM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by Leanne - 12-19-2015, 08:52 AM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by Achebe - 12-19-2015, 09:01 AM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by billy - 12-19-2015, 01:49 PM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by rowens - 12-19-2015, 08:55 AM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by Leanne - 12-19-2015, 08:59 AM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by ellajam - 12-19-2015, 09:44 AM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by milo - 12-19-2015, 10:00 AM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by rayheinrich - 12-19-2015, 11:35 PM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by ellajam - 12-20-2015, 12:42 AM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by shemthepenman - 12-20-2015, 08:32 AM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by Achebe - 12-20-2015, 08:49 AM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by Leanne - 12-20-2015, 09:43 AM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by rayheinrich - 12-20-2015, 01:43 PM

RE: Do I make you uncomfortable? Do I, baby? Yeah! - by Erthona - 01-24-2016, 06:39 PM

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