EDIT 2: On Falling In

EDIT 2: On Falling In

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12-18-2015, 03:56 AM

Thanks for the comments, they help, but you were able to make out most of it...

The stanza's all capture the same exact image, but just continuously condensed...

I thought about adding single lined stanza's in between the existing stanza's for the purpose of clarification but nothing seems to fit.

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EDIT 2: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-03-2015, 11:19 AM

RE: On Falling In - by Magpie - 12-03-2015, 12:19 PM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-04-2015, 04:22 AM

RE: On Falling In - by Achebe - 12-04-2015, 05:28 PM

RE: On Falling In - by billy - 12-04-2015, 05:49 PM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-05-2015, 09:21 AM

RE: On Falling In - by billy - 12-05-2015, 10:11 AM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-05-2015, 10:30 AM

RE: On Falling In - by billy - 12-05-2015, 10:42 AM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-05-2015, 10:34 PM