12-18-2015, 03:05 AM
Lovely suggestions all. Thanks again.
Although I am disturbed by the suggestion that it was "long". It's not THAT long, we just live in an era where microwaves cook too slowly, and our attention span and focus are broken. And depending on what I do, it might get even longer.
The repeat of expectations was sloppiness. The tickling of the hand is an attempt to pull physical sensation into it, will work on something else. I wasn't happy with it either.
Oranges are a somewhat inside joke I will expand on in the future.
Will take a few weeks at the pace I have to work on "work" versus poetry, so don't think I am ignoring everyone if it takes some time.
Although I am disturbed by the suggestion that it was "long". It's not THAT long, we just live in an era where microwaves cook too slowly, and our attention span and focus are broken. And depending on what I do, it might get even longer.
The repeat of expectations was sloppiness. The tickling of the hand is an attempt to pull physical sensation into it, will work on something else. I wasn't happy with it either.
Oranges are a somewhat inside joke I will expand on in the future.
Will take a few weeks at the pace I have to work on "work" versus poetry, so don't think I am ignoring everyone if it takes some time.