Stark Contrast (was Stark) rev #4.
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aschueler,
Thats awesome you have that problem, and getting all your thoughts out on paper while you're in surplus of them. I'm feelin the opposite lately Big Grin but I think the length might be one of your issues, most people don't crit a poem if they haven't read the whole thing and this ones pretty long. And for future reference if you make a edit just edit it on your original post, and im pretty sure the workshops are just for how committed you are to the poem and how extensive you want the crit to be(I could be wrong, im still learning too).
Mike
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Stark Contrast (was Stark) rev #4. - by aschueler - 12-07-2015, 03:38 AM
RE: Stark - by Achebe - 12-07-2015, 06:03 AM
RE: Stark - by aschueler - 12-07-2015, 09:49 AM
RE: Stark - by Weeded - 12-17-2015, 06:53 PM
RE: Stark - by aschueler - 12-17-2015, 09:47 PM
RE: Stark - by QDeathstar - 12-17-2015, 10:18 PM
RE: Stark - by Weeded - 12-17-2015, 10:39 PM
RE: Stark - by ellajam - 12-17-2015, 11:47 PM
RE: Stark - by aschueler - 12-18-2015, 03:05 AM
RE: Stark - by Weeded - 12-18-2015, 11:38 AM
RE: Stark - by aschueler - 12-27-2015, 10:33 PM
RE: Stark - by Apache - 12-30-2015, 01:25 PM
RE: Stark - by QDeathstar - 12-28-2015, 12:21 AM
RE: Stark (edit #1) - by aschueler - 12-28-2015, 06:28 AM
RE: Stark (edit #1) - by QDeathstar - 12-28-2015, 12:10 PM
RE: Stark (edit #1) - by REW - 12-31-2015, 03:04 AM
RE: Stark (edit #1) - by aschueler - 12-31-2015, 08:12 AM



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