Signs

[Morze]

I really like this piece, is wild yet calmed, some might feel its romantic but others don't, it takes the reader to many places. The metaphor is great and wide, these kind of things make great artistic writings. I personally prefer the first version, although it might need some corrections is more "juicy", with more good use of words and ideas. I'm not an expert, just an average Joe that has a passion for art and different kinds of expression, not caring too much for metrics or stiff poetry rules. Well done I enjoyed it very much.

Morze.