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me rapping(explicit)

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12-15-2015, 10:02 AM

Ronsaik,
Thanks! Yeahh I wish I had a microphone setup, currently recording off my phone so I apologize for the poor quality,
Buk- Bukowski, one of the many amazing poets PigPen exposed me to.
And for that line it actually starts
"We in an era where..." (vs. live in an era)
That said not sure if the meters still off?

Crit away

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me rapping(explicit) - by Weeded - 12-06-2015, 07:06 PM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by milo - 12-06-2015, 11:46 PM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by ellajam - 12-07-2015, 12:08 AM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by milo - 12-07-2015, 12:32 AM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by QDeathstar - 12-07-2015, 12:54 AM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Weeded - 12-07-2015, 04:48 AM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Magpie - 12-07-2015, 05:01 AM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Weeded - 12-07-2015, 05:36 AM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Achebe - 12-08-2015, 06:28 PM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Weeded - 12-08-2015, 07:35 PM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Achebe - 12-08-2015, 08:06 PM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Weeded - 12-08-2015, 08:11 PM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Weeded - 12-13-2015, 04:05 PM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Achebe - 12-13-2015, 07:04 PM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Weeded - 12-15-2015, 10:02 AM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Weeded - 01-10-2016, 07:46 AM

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