12-14-2015, 11:53 AM
A still working on that first stanza, I think this is a step foward, thanks for the comments above, and looking foward to comments below.
Unending verdant fields and the twinkle of fireflies
spiral in orbit around a country cottage reflecting
the sun's rich amber on cedar siding at dusk
just before the atrophy of summer's afterglow.
Nebulae of green surround the silhouette
created by a rural cabin's eclipse
of the fading sun drifting
below summer's horizon.
Earthen tones accrete around
unnatural shape then collapse
into perpetual darkness.
Light meets darkness
as form softens.
A Light
and a Dark. Darkness|
light.
singularity
Unending verdant fields and the twinkle of fireflies
spiral in orbit around a country cottage reflecting
the sun's rich amber on cedar siding at dusk
just before the atrophy of summer's afterglow.
Nebulae of green surround the silhouette
created by a rural cabin's eclipse
of the fading sun drifting
below summer's horizon.
Earthen tones accrete around
unnatural shape then collapse
into perpetual darkness.
Light meets darkness
as form softens.
A Light
and a Dark. Darkness|
light.
singularity