In a Fall
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Hi Larry - yes, I'm sorry, your poem does have a consistent syllable count. It's the lack of consistent meter that threw me.
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In a Fall - by Larry B. - 12-13-2015, 05:14 AM
RE: In a Fall - by just mercedes - 12-13-2015, 05:36 AM
RE: In a Fall - by Larry B. - 12-13-2015, 01:01 PM
RE: In a Fall - by Achebe - 12-13-2015, 01:24 PM
RE: In a Fall - by QDeathstar - 12-13-2015, 01:28 PM
RE: In a Fall - by just mercedes - 12-13-2015, 03:19 PM
RE: In a Fall - by John1865 - 12-14-2015, 09:52 AM
RE: In a Fall - by enigmaticexistence - 12-14-2015, 04:03 PM
RE: In a Fall - by ellajam - 12-14-2015, 11:10 PM
RE: In a Fall - by Larry B. - 12-15-2015, 11:49 PM
RE: In a Fall - by TSlate - 12-20-2015, 09:24 AM
RE: In a Fall - by Jeremiahcp - 12-26-2015, 02:38 AM



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