EDIT 2: On Falling In

[Wjames]

Edit:

A vast verdant field gathers flowers and butterflies I don't really like "a vast verdant field". I think the alliteration is a little forced. I do however, much prefer "verdant" to more repetition of green as in the OG; I would change vast if this was my poem.
fluttering in orbit around a country cottage covered by wet
moss and charcoal colored cedar soaking up sunshine I like the sound of this line.
radiated by the atrophy of summer's afterglow. "radiated by the atrophy" is a little too much for me.

Nebulae of green surround the silhouette 
created by a rural cabin's eclipse
of the fading sun drifting
below summer's horizon. I like this stanza - I can feel everything you show.

Earthen tones accrete around
unnatural shape then collapse
into perpetual darkness.  I can't picture this stanza.

Light meets darkness
as shapes soften.

A Light
and a Dark. Darkness|
light.

singularity I don't really get the connection to the singularity.

I don't know much about the singularity, but I thought it was when computers could improve themselves or something - I couldn't connect it to this poem. I think you have some good images in there though. The title made me think it might be a love poem (I.e: Falling in love)