12-11-2015, 12:01 PM
the form in you is strong young wonkywalker
the couplet works though if you want a suggestion, it would be to
alter [still wants to hang around] it feels a little out of kilter with the language at use in the sonnet.
the couplet works though if you want a suggestion, it would be to
alter [still wants to hang around] it feels a little out of kilter with the language at use in the sonnet.