January Floods

January Floods

DrGoldsmack
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12-10-2015, 11:26 AM

(01-20-2015, 06:12 AM)charlie142 Wrote: January Floods

It's not a
crash
a plunge
a tumble -
Rather a dull
thud
- then the slow,
seeping
Explosion of a violet
invasion

an army of strain
in the squalor of the sighs

I like the visuals that you are providing, I must say i enjoy abstract poetry. However I am somewhat thrown when you say "explosion of violet".

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January Floods - by charlie142 - 01-20-2015, 06:12 AM

RE: January Floods - by Brownlie - 01-20-2015, 08:16 AM

RE: January Floods - by Magpie - 01-20-2015, 12:36 PM

RE: January Floods - by Balor1712 - 06-11-2015, 12:23 PM

RE: January Floods - by xyroph - 12-01-2015, 02:04 PM

RE: January Floods - by samyarb - 12-05-2015, 06:26 AM

RE: January Floods - by ThePen - 12-08-2015, 04:43 AM

RE: January Floods - by DrGoldsmack - 12-10-2015, 11:26 AM

RE: January Floods - by enigmaticexistence - 12-14-2015, 04:10 PM

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