12-09-2015, 06:58 AM
Hi Keith,
Liking this one very much. How come I've never heard of Belle Vue speedway before? It sounds terribly posh for stock car racing.
I was going to ask if you meant to say 'loose' instead of 'lose' at the beginning of the last stanza. In some sense 'lose' works, but I'm not sure works grammatically. Then I noticed 'breaks' instead of 'brakes' so now I'm worried I'm missing some clever play, I've been awake too long and I'm getting too old sometimes.
Still enjoyed it, either way.
Cheers for the read,
Mark
Liking this one very much. How come I've never heard of Belle Vue speedway before? It sounds terribly posh for stock car racing.
I was going to ask if you meant to say 'loose' instead of 'lose' at the beginning of the last stanza. In some sense 'lose' works, but I'm not sure works grammatically. Then I noticed 'breaks' instead of 'brakes' so now I'm worried I'm missing some clever play, I've been awake too long and I'm getting too old sometimes.
Still enjoyed it, either way.
Cheers for the read,
Mark
wae aye man ye radgie