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#10

12-08-2015, 07:35 PM

Ronsaik,
Thanks for noticing! This is by far the most difficult flow ive tried to sustain, any parts in particular you felt were off-beat?

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me rapping(explicit) - by Weeded - 12-06-2015, 07:06 PM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by milo - 12-06-2015, 11:46 PM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by ellajam - 12-07-2015, 12:08 AM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by milo - 12-07-2015, 12:32 AM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by QDeathstar - 12-07-2015, 12:54 AM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Weeded - 12-07-2015, 04:48 AM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Magpie - 12-07-2015, 05:01 AM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Weeded - 12-07-2015, 05:36 AM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Achebe - 12-08-2015, 06:28 PM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Weeded - 12-08-2015, 07:35 PM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Achebe - 12-08-2015, 08:06 PM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Weeded - 12-08-2015, 08:11 PM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Weeded - 12-13-2015, 04:05 PM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Achebe - 12-13-2015, 07:04 PM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Weeded - 12-15-2015, 10:02 AM

RE: me rapping(explicit) - by Weeded - 01-10-2016, 07:46 AM

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