12-08-2015, 04:43 AM
(01-20-2015, 06:12 AM)charlie142 Wrote: January FloodsThis poem is quite suggestive. I like that you use so many words that connote sound: "crash", "plunge", "tumble", "thud". What I do not understand is the inclusion of "violet". Is rain not supposed to be blue, like water?
It's not a
crash
a plunge
a tumble -
Rather a dull
thud
- then the slow,
seeping
Explosion of a violet
invasion
an army of strain
in the squalor of the sighs
I still do not, however, understand the last stanza.