January Floods
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(01-20-2015, 06:12 AM)charlie142 Wrote:  January Floods

It's not a
crash
a plunge
a tumble -
Rather a dull
thud
- then the slow,
seeping
Explosion of a violet
invasion

an army of strain
in the squalor of the sighs
This poem is quite suggestive. I like that you use so many words that connote sound: "crash", "plunge", "tumble", "thud". What I do not understand is the inclusion of "violet". Is rain not supposed to be blue, like water?

I still do not, however, understand the last stanza.
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January Floods - by charlie142 - 01-20-2015, 06:12 AM
RE: January Floods - by Brownlie - 01-20-2015, 08:16 AM
RE: January Floods - by Magpie - 01-20-2015, 12:36 PM
RE: January Floods - by Balor1712 - 06-11-2015, 12:23 PM
RE: January Floods - by xyroph - 12-01-2015, 02:04 PM
RE: January Floods - by samyarb - 12-05-2015, 06:26 AM
RE: January Floods - by ThePen - 12-08-2015, 04:43 AM
RE: January Floods - by DrGoldsmack - 12-10-2015, 11:26 AM
RE: January Floods - by enigmaticexistence - 12-14-2015, 04:10 PM



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