12-05-2015, 10:34 PM
Billy, I'm not quite sure what you are trying to say.
Am I being too discordant with vast verdant or "too pretty" and not discordant enough? also, you explain a bit more on "it feels opposite". It seems like a a large problem with the poem seems to be first stanza, so if I can fix that... Thanks.
Am I being too discordant with vast verdant or "too pretty" and not discordant enough? also, you explain a bit more on "it feels opposite". It seems like a a large problem with the poem seems to be first stanza, so if I can fix that... Thanks.