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EDIT 2: On Falling In

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12-05-2015, 10:42 AM

over the top can be good but it has to work, if want to use discord really mess up the meter, some discordant words exist, look them up and see if they can be used. at present it feels like it wants to be pretty. [only my opinion by the way which probably carries little weight Big Grin

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EDIT 2: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-03-2015, 11:19 AM

RE: On Falling In - by Magpie - 12-03-2015, 12:19 PM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-04-2015, 04:22 AM

RE: On Falling In - by Achebe - 12-04-2015, 05:28 PM

RE: On Falling In - by billy - 12-04-2015, 05:49 PM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-05-2015, 09:21 AM

RE: On Falling In - by billy - 12-05-2015, 10:11 AM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-05-2015, 10:30 AM

RE: On Falling In - by billy - 12-05-2015, 10:42 AM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-05-2015, 10:34 PM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-11-2015, 10:12 AM

RE: On Falling In - by Jacob - 12-11-2015, 12:39 PM

RE: On Falling In - by Wjames - 12-11-2015, 01:42 PM

RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-14-2015, 11:53 AM

RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-18-2015, 01:55 AM

RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by Magpie - 12-18-2015, 02:45 AM

RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-18-2015, 03:56 AM

RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by Magpie - 12-18-2015, 04:09 AM

RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by aschueler - 12-18-2015, 10:26 AM

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