EDIT 2: On Falling In

EDIT 2: On Falling In

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12-05-2015, 10:30 AM

I did get that feeling while reading the poem, kinda sounded like a bunch of tubas tooting at the same time.... On the other hand that first stanza is really supposed to be over the top... you kinda strip away the layers of language as you drift down the poem.

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EDIT 2: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-03-2015, 11:19 AM

RE: On Falling In - by Magpie - 12-03-2015, 12:19 PM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-04-2015, 04:22 AM

RE: On Falling In - by Achebe - 12-04-2015, 05:28 PM

RE: On Falling In - by billy - 12-04-2015, 05:49 PM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-05-2015, 09:21 AM

RE: On Falling In - by billy - 12-05-2015, 10:11 AM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-05-2015, 10:30 AM

RE: On Falling In - by billy - 12-05-2015, 10:42 AM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-05-2015, 10:34 PM